Analysis of the writing skills in the speech on Bush’s Speech of 911 Attacks
Good evening.
Today, our fellow citizens, our way of life, our very freedom came under attack in a series of deliberate and deadly terrorist acts. The victims were in airplanes or in their offices. Secretaries, business men and women, military and federal workers. Moms and dads. Friends and neighbors.
Thousands of lives were suddenly ended by evil, despicable acts of terror.
The pictures of airplanes flying into buildings, fires burning, huge structures collapsing, have filled us with disbelief, terrible sadness and a quiet, unyielding anger.
These acts of mass murder were intended to frighten our nation into chaos and retreat. But they have failed. Our country is strong. A great people has been moved to defend a great nation.
Terrorist attacks can shake the foundations of our biggest buildings, but they cannot touch the foundation of America. These acts shatter steel, but they cannot dent the steel of American resolve.
America was targeted for attack because we're the brightest beacon for freedom and opportunity in the world. And no one will keep that light from shining.
Today, our nation saw evil, the very worst of human nature, and we responded with the best of America, with the daring of our rescue workers, with the caring for strangers and neighbors who came to give blood and help in any way they could.
Immediately following the first attack, I implemented our government's emergency response plans. Our military is powerful, and it's prepared. Our emergency teams are working in New York City and Washington, D.C., to help with local rescue efforts.
Our first priority is to get help to those who have been injured and to take every precaution to protect our citizens at home and around the world from further attacks.
The functions of our government continue without interruption. Federal agencies in Washington, which had to be evacuated today, are reopening for essential personnel tonight and will be open for business tomorrow.
Our financial institutions remain strong, and the American economy will be open for business as well.
The search is under way for those who are behind these evil acts. I've directed the full resources for our intelligence and law enforcement communities to find those responsible and bring them to justice. We will make no distinction between the terrorists who committed these acts and those who harbor them.
I appreciate so very much the members of Congress who have joined me in strongly condemning these attacks. And on behalf of the American people, I thank the many world leaders who have called to offer their condolences and assistance.
America and our friends and allies join with all those who want peace and security in the world and we stand together to win the war against terrorism.
Tonight I ask for your prayers for all those who grieve, for the children whose worlds have been shattered, for all whose sense of safety and security has been threatened. And I pray they will be comforted by a power greater than any of us spoken through the ages in Psalm 23: 'Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I fear no evil for you are with me.'
This is a day when all Americans from every walk of life unite in our resolve for justice and peace. America has stood down enemies before, and we will do so this time.
None of us will ever forget this day, yet we go forward to defend freedom and all that is good and just in our world.
Thank you. Good night and God bless America.'
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1.Metaphor
Metaphor belongs to the figure of words’ meaning and makes the political speech more vivid and infective. Bush only used 2 metaphors in his speech which expressed exactly.
Here is one of the metaphors:
America was targeted for attack because we’re the brightest beacon for freedom and opportunity in the world.And no one will keep that light from shining.
Bush compared America to the “beacon” which refers to declare the leading place of America in the world. Furthermore, the beacon” and the “light” are the consequence of human beings. “No one will keep that light from shining” shows American confidence, which is the foundation of politics.
Another metaphor is:
Terrorist attacks can shake the foundations of our biggest buildings,but they cannot touch the foundation of America.These acts shatter steel,but they cannot dent the steel of American resolve.
Bush compared the “American resolve” to the steel which hints that American cannot be defeated by the terrorism, cannot submit to humiliation and can face the disaster with higher spirit.
2.Allusion
Allusion also belongs to the figure of words’ meaning and it can show the emotion such as love and hate, appreciation and depreciation more sufficiently and deeply, and make the whole speech persuasive.
Here is an example in Bush’s speech:
And I pray they will be comforted by a power greater than any of us spoken through the ages in Psalm 23: " Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death,I fear no evil for you are with me. "
The president Bush quoted the chapter 23 in the Bible and divided it politically. Goodness and evil are equal to the god and the devil. “I” am the god and the terrorism is the devil. Bush hoped the audiences to rebuild their ation to reorganize the order of the world and he decreased the distance between him and the audiences.
3. Parallelism
Parallelism is full of expressive force. And it use three or more than three phrases or sentences which have the similar meaning and structure. In Bush’s speech, he used a large mount of parallelism to increase the momentum and incitation.
Here is an example of parallelism in his speech:
Today,our nation saw evil,the very worst of human nature,and we responded with the best of America,with the daring of our rescue workers,with the caring for strangers and neighbors who came to give blood and help in any way they could.
Bush used “with” for five times, which indicates that America cannot be defeated by the terrorism. Furthermore, the Americans, the rescuers and all the people who love peace will help America to get through the disaster. And, Bush calls on all the people to revolt the terrorism.
4. Contract
Contract is one kind of the figure of syntax which arranges the contrary words, phrases or sentences together to form a sharp contrast.
Here is an example of contract in the speech:
Terrorist attacks can shake the foundations of our biggest buildings,but they cannot touch the foundation of America.
These acts shatter steel,but they cannot dent the steel of American resolve.
In these two sentences, Bush contrasted “our biggest buildings” with the firm faith of the Americans and compared the “steel” with “the steel of American resolve”. He also used “but” to draw the audiences’ attention, which shows that although the terrorism can “shatter steel”, it cannot ruin the iron will of Americans. This contract can stimulate the emotion of the audiences and impresses them profoundly.
5. Climax
Climax is another kind of the figure of syntax which can deepen the content and strengthen the emotion gradually. It realizes the spiritual and semantic promotion by the structural changes.
Here is an example of climax in the speech:
Our military is powerful…. Our emergency teams are working in New York City …. Our first priority is to get help to those…. The functions of our government continue without interruption …. Our financial institutions remain strong….
Bush used “our” for five times, which emphasizes the optimistic attitude to his country and his people and the firm faith to the further. After this disaster, America remains its hope and energy which lead the speech to the climax.
6. Alliteration
Alliteration is one kind of figure of phonology which has the forceful sense of rhythm to draw the attention of the audiences.
Here is an example of alliteration in the speech:
Today,our fellow citizens,our way of life,our very freedom came under attack in a series of deliberate and deadly terrorist acts.
Bush used “deliberate” and ”deadly” to express that the Americans hate the terrorism’s guts. Alliteration appeals to the audiences, stirs up their imagination and arouses their judgment of goodness and evil. At the same time, it impresses the audiences deeply.
Conclusion:
Bush used the figure such as metaphor, contract, and climax properly to highlight his points of view. This speech impels and impresses the audiences deeply with the vivid expression and sonorous words. The figure not only decorates the President Bush’s speech, but also has the semantic function to contain and deliver the connotation. Moreover, analyzing the figure can deepen our cognition of the figure’s semantic function, promote our understanding and appreciation of figure and improve our capacity of use figure to deliver semantics.