1. Background Information
Al Gore was born in 1948 in Washington D.C., U.S. He has been a Senator (1984~1992) representing the State of Tennessee, and U.S. Vice-President (1992~2000) under President Bill Clinton. He ran for the Presidency against George W. Bush but the latter won the closely tied election and has become the 43rd American President. After retirement, he devoted his time to environmental protection. The text is taken from Al Gore’s book Earth in the Balance.
The Aral Sea, located in Uzbekistan and Kazakhstan (Both countries were part of the former Soviet Union), is historically a saline lake. It is in the centre of a large, flat desert basin. The Aral Sea is a prime example of a dynamic environment.
2. Text Analysis
This piece is taken from Al Gore’s book Earth in the Balance.
The text is an exposition, the purpose of which is to explain to human beings the serious ecological problem resulting from human activities. It is developed in the ways of comparison, contrast, analogy, identification, illustration, analysis, definition, etc.
3. Structure of the Text
The text is divided into three parts:
Part1 (paragraph1 to 8): the list of the images of environmental destruction;
Part 2 (paragraph 9 to 16): analysis of the global threats posed by the environmental destruction and the common cause — the change in the relationship between human civilization and the earth’s natural balance;
Part 3 (paragraph 17 to 26): the solution to environmental destructions — reinventing and healing the relationship between civilization and the earth
4. Key words and Expressions
bleak, lap, at the very bottom of, parka, crack, peel, emission, accessible, thus far, pick up speed, rising level, upwind, runway, monitor, chart the course, pitch, slab, frigid, snowmobile, rendezvous point, hover, take on, resubmerge, eerily, windswept, scenario, a still controversial claim, the pattern of ice distribution, billowing, latitude, noctilucent, cloak, shimmer, translucent, release, landfill, swarm, biomass, startle, spectral, massive, paralysis, be reserved for, in a global context, aquifer, large oil spill, concentration, equilibrium, in turn, in prehistoric times, in one’s search for, acceleration, ongoing, exponential, subsequent, inspiring, obsolete, reinvent
5. Analysis of Rhetorical Devices
understatement; alliteration; metaphor; synecdoche; contrast; etc.
6. Writing Techniques
1) Effective use of verbs to make the exposition vivid and lively
2) The Analysis of the environment is in light of the military, which helps to arouse the readers’ interest and concern.
3) the purpose of expository writing: to explain or inform.
4) ways of organizing an expository writing: example; definition; comparison and contrast; division and classification; process analysis; causal analysis.